you are a wonderful poet!!! i hope that you continue to write. i really like 'soar' because it seems to say an awful lot for only two lines which is a really good thing for a poet to do. it's quite amazing!
it's horrible that lovely things often come out of terrible things, especially poetry and negative personal experience. i hope you have a lovely day, and i also hope that you are very aware that you're an amazing writer; your structure is amazing, especially how you used enjambment, the run on ...