Sara, I have had the privilege of reading some of your other work but this short simple poem speaks volumes. It is able to convey the beauty and the fierceness of life and what is had to offer or take from you if allowed. Keep pushing forward and don't settle! ...
Hope is always where you need to look for a bit of relief and freshness in life. Never give up hope and look to the small and fantastic things to feed such hope.
Different than your normal work but I can see this inside of you. How intolerance would cause things in your life to become unstable and hard. Let us see what's inside of you and we'll see the depth of your writing.