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  • Your poetry is very visceral. I liked a lot of your choices in wording and the comparisons that you draw. I can tell that it has been quite some time since this was written and I can only hope that some of the pain you are expressing has ben dissipated ...
    on Da P.E.N. (Public Enemy Napalm) by Carlos Brown May 7, 2021