March 30, 2013

I Noticed "Dat"... A Mass Text To Adult Children

by Antwiane Sago

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To: Q.I.T.'s

I Noticed "Dat"...
A Mass Text To Adult CHILDREN

U've tried 2 use so many dudes, 2 do what U can do 4 yo'self.
If only U, had 1/2 a clue, how U bein used an losin yo'self.
I no it's up 2 U 2 choose what U assume is right or wrong;
But U confused, an if U go on,
This GAME will cheat you out of yo life N da long run.
U're 2 young 2 no da rules, an 2 C THE GAME is designed 2 hurt U;
So U don't notice what I do.
Like all da lies U've told, been told, B 4 so nothing's bran new,
Sweetie but U!
Say what U want, U an I no it's tru.
I wish U could understand that U're so much mo than some lame's Boo.
I don't mean 2 make it rain on yo parade;
But U ain't doin nothing special Babe. I promise there's a betta way.
So I had 2 let U no I Noticed Dat!
Whether U like it or not, I've got 2 lace U wit uncut facts.
Doesn't matta if I'm here an U're there;
Read my words wit yo heart an U'll all C dat I care.
#Don't U Notice Dat?

To: K.I.T.'s

U picked up da habits of drinkin Hen, an blowin Dro wit da L7's U call friens.
On da bloc grindin, so called "Chasin Endz".
Failing 2 C U're really chasin a "Bit In Da Pen!"
U're N search of a Jewel U'll neva find;
While daily makin bad choices an wastin time.
B 4 long U find yo'self N a bad way;
Facin a Judge all alone on a criminal case.
N a cage wit yo thoughts as fear chillz U 2 da bone!
Flashin bac 2 all U lost, an how U wish U were HOME!
U're uncertain bout da end result of yo charge;
But U no for a fac dat U've broke yo mother's heart.
U can clearly here each time she begged U 2 change,
And yo voice as U lied an kept on playin THE GAME.
U don said so many things dat U don't mean, U've spent yo'self.
Of all da promises U've made it's sad 2 say not 1's been kept.
Now U mad & upset cause no 1 takes U 4 yo word;
An dat's 2 bad an really sad cuz where U at now really hurts!
#Don't U Notice Dat?

If you can feel this piece, hit me at:
Antwiane Sago #428132
W.C.I. P.O. Box 351
Waupun, WI 53963-0351

If you notice it, you can fix it.

Salt in a flavorless world.
A.M.

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lala911 Posted 10 years, 11 months ago. ✓ Mailed 10 years, 10 months ago   Favorite
Hi Brother,

I finally had time time to look your blog! Very impressive.

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