This poem used such an interesting mix of words you don't normally expect to read in poetry. The imagery used with this type of language writes a poem that flows more and feels more real in comparison to poetry we were forced to read in high school.
This was a very moving poem. The butterfly kisses was such an interesting touch and a term I haven't heard since I was a kid. It shows the depth of your emotions here.
I can really feel your emotions coming through the words here. I hope that you are not still scared or alone, and that you can reconcile with your regrets.
This reminds me of an art history class I took in the past. This feels like something right out of the textbook. Copying a specific art style can be incredibly difficult!
These pieces of art feel so calming to me. The way you created the ocean, even the stormy ocean waves just feel so real and serene. It's hard to capture both feelings in one piece.
Dear James, I unfortunately do not live in Belgium. I am actually a college student in New Jersey! That’s really crazy you received a letter from another Alisandra, I always thought there wasn’t many of us with that name. I have traveled to France and I speak the language semi-fluently. ...