March 4, 2012

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From The Green Zone by Michael Ray Charles Green
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New Demension
(Nov. 3, 2011)

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Reply ID: l3mu

Song: Don't Be A Fool
Songwriter: Michael Ray Charles Green
Song Creation Date: 1-16-2012

Verse: Two (continued)

Bar 29: If all of your friends jumped off of a cliff
Bar 30: Would you take off running, go after, and jump with?
Bar 31: I ain't talking about them, I'm worried about you
Bar 32: I'll never tell you, "go and do something that hurts you"

Chorus:
Bar 33: This is what my momma told me
Bar 34: Stay out the streets and go to school
Bar 35: Mike,what?!
Bar 36: Don't be a fool

Verse: Three
Bar 37: What do you really love, what do you like to do?
Bar 38: Don't you know you can do that and get paid too?!
Bar 39: Once you make it out of college, please don't be like the rest
Bar 40: 'Cause once you got the knowledge, you should strive to be the best
Bar 41: Be the master of the skill, a guru of the trade
Bar 42: Make people want to come to your business and get paid!
Bar 43: Stop procrastinating, get up and go get it!
Bar 44: I'm knowing you can do it yourself 'cause I did it!
Bar 45: Eliminate excuses, accumulate degrees
Bar 46: You unlock a lot of doors when you holding that paper key
Bar 47: There's more to this life, don't let these streets fool you
Bar 48: You don't want to be stupid all of your life, do you?

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Bettyann Posted 8 years, 7 months ago. ✓ Mailed 8 years, 7 months ago   Favorite
Excellent rap! Keep spreading the word and keep writing the word. Our mothers must have conferenced with each other since I got the very same advice from my mother. Though she is deceased now, I still hear her voice sending out the very same messages you heard from your mother. I think it is part of the universal wisdom God send down to mothers. I look forward to reading some more of your songs. I wish I could hear a recording of you rapping the songs.

Bettyann

Michael Ray Charles Green Posted 8 years, 4 months ago.   Favorite
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