July 18, 2013

Comment Response

by Joseph Thibodeaux
This post is in reply to comments on:  Untitled thumbnail
(May 25, 2013)



Thank you for your wonderful comment
on my poem. It's not that often I get any.
I think most people look at them as dark
and messed up or they just don't get them.
But please A/S/L. And please tell
me a little about yourself.

And please tell me what do you think of
my new poem? It aso don't have a name

≈ Pain is just an illusion that resides in
the brain.
You can't die from just pain alone.
But loneliness on the other hand resides in
the heart.
And a broken heart is like a shattered soul
that death waits to behold.
And I can feel his eye on me.
But still he waits to end this lost life
I try to call my own.
But my Destiny obviously to forever be alone
trying to forever end this lonely life F**ked
up and stoned. ≈

By: Joe


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wolfkeeper Posted 6 years, 1 month ago. ✓ Mailed 6 years ago   Favorite
Thanks for writing! I finished the transcription for your post.

I love the new poem! Your poems reflect what is inside you and when it's pain and lonliness, then I guess that could be considered dark, but it's raw and real emotion.

Joseph Thibodeaux Posted 5 years, 11 months ago.   Favorite
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