Each day I fight off cold emotion
That tries to steal my drive to live
This emotional twister -is out of control
It's been 51 years of Pure Hell
With home made cards I play Solitary
Trying to ignore my pear like body -
Of withered skin
Just cells away exists Charles Manson
Lord knows he's flipped a card or two
I'm stuck on pause
Is there a pill for being stupid
2023 feb 22
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2022 apr 16
First, let me say thank you.
I think the word "haunting" describes it well. It's something that I will remember.
The use of words with double meanings was clever and gave the piece an overall sense of togetherness.
Maybe a little bit more punctuation?