March 10, 2026

Nature's Roof

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Natures' Roof
How the treed plateau
offers shade and solitude
of comfort to camp- 6/824;
8:02 pm Will Irving

Penciling
Ash gray day, lingers
threatening to storm, its rains pour
to drench the plains, some-
2/18/26; 10:42 pm Will Irving

Exceptional Setting
Record warmth warming
this February is blessed
Sun like summers' song - 2/17/26,
10:53pm

Mellow Breeze
As gentle as the
wind speaks below the sun, soft
yet warming endepth- 2/17/26;
10:59pm Will Irving

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spirally Posted 8 hours, 42 minutes ago.   Favorite
These are so nice!Thank you for sharing your haiku. It's also really great that you share the exact time and day of the scene - it's a poetic weather report - I'll have to see if you've sent more in. I'd love to see a whole book of them in chronological order with a painting or photo to go with them.On second thought, the words are conveying the scene just as well as a picture so maybe just the words. Anyway, I really like them, they are compelling and have a strong voice.

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