Jan. 15, 2014

Sometimes When I Look At You

by Marchristian Thomas (author's profile)


Sometimes When I Look At You

Sometimes when I look at you, I can hardly believe you're mine. I think about how attractive you are, how caring and sensitive, how interesting and funny. And I can hardly believe that out of this whole world of people, I was lucky enough to find you.

Sometimes when I look at you, I remember what it was like in the beginning when we were just getting to know each other. I'll never forget that nervous excitement I used to feel every time I saw you and relive the tenderness of our very first kiss.

Sometimes when I look at you, I get lost in memories of special times we've shared in daydreams of the happiness we've got to discover together.

Every time I look at you, I realize how much I love the love we share and how very much I love you.

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A Newfound God of Understanding

So many nights I would wake up to unforgiving screams
My mother would say it was my imagination, only a figment of my dreams
She said that the reason I couldn't cry was because I was strong
Though the tears I was crying inside my soul were tearing me down all along
On the outside I built up walls to keep out predators on the loose
Because I knew at any given moment I could become a statistic due to my roots
So many hate me for what I'm not but I'd rather you hate me for who I am
A newfound God of understanding continued inside this man

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bbygirlmarie14 Posted 10 years, 1 month ago. ✓ Mailed 10 years ago   Favorite
Hey my phat man imy you so much .just got alot going on out here .i know you might think i forgot about you but that is a never .you are my first love and love of my life i just am scared to write cuz if you known the half of what im goin through yoy would flip ....well hope to get a letter soon imy and love you always since i was young Tanya M.Sherrod

Marchristian Thomas Posted 9 years, 11 months ago.   Favorite
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ricob84 Posted 9 years, 6 months ago. ✓ Mailed 9 years, 6 months ago   Favorite
Wuz up mark..its Riccardo..I haven't forgot about u lil bro..what's the latest?

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