What's up with you, BTB viewers?
I apologize for not responding to your comments right away. Between the Bars just sent me your comments today (7-3-13). I would have wrote sooner, but Between the Bars sent my mail to my old prison. Now I am responding to your comments. Sorry things took so long.
This is my reply to 7nqk:
I'm sorry it took so long to get back at you. I'm kinda confused on your comment and I don't wanna take anything out of its contexts, but if my poem was clear to you, then your message was clear to me. I'm glad it was my poem that got your attention. Now I gotta figure out how to keep it, me being in a vulnerable state of mind. I don't wanna take anything out of context.
But on the other hand, I hope my thoughts are right. I must admit I wrote the poem for one reason: to get a reply. So thanks a lot.
Here's a gift to you from me. I hope you read this poem. Let me know if you have.
The Heart Knows What It Wants
The heart knows what it wants
it understands the unthinkable
It speaks volumes on another level
You and I will never comprehend.
The heart will contest for a position
where it feels it belongs.
The heart holds precious value
what we try to tap into
that
unconditional love
and
tender affection.
The heart plays a beautiful melody
that can sooth your soul for a lifetime.
The heart pups a formula called passion
through your veins.
It lingers with lovely
rare sweetness.
The heart is made of rich velvet
that keeps the body and soul
warmed up for love.
The heart knows what it wants
listen to your heart
it knows what it
wants.
From Chance B
My info: Benny Choice #454160
PO Box 351
Waupun, WI 53963-0351
P.S. You don't have to go through Between the Bars to get at me. I would like to have a one-on-one conversation with you soon. I can write poetry for your eyes only. Write back.
Be-Eazy
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