This reminds me of an art history class I took in the past. This feels like something right out of the textbook. Copying a specific art style can be incredibly difficult!
I can really feel your emotions coming through the words here. I hope that you are not still scared or alone, and that you can reconcile with your regrets.
This was a very moving poem. The butterfly kisses was such an interesting touch and a term I haven't heard since I was a kid. It shows the depth of your emotions here.
This poem used such an interesting mix of words you don't normally expect to read in poetry. The imagery used with this type of language writes a poem that flows more and feels more real in comparison to poetry we were forced to read in high school.
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