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RonaGal Posted 11 years, 10 months ago.   Favorite
Book 3 is the best one...I hope you enjoyed it! The current season of the show is the first part of book 3. I can't wait for the weddings. Keep us posted on what you think of the rest of the series.

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iThinkB4uAct Posted 11 years, 10 months ago.   Favorite
IGNORANCE IS A BLISS... NO NEED TO RESPOND.

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grace Posted 11 years, 11 months ago.   Favorite
Patrick:

I did not want this writing to end. I will send you a couple comments on areas that I needed more details. Somethings are hard for me to imagine. I LOVE your descriptions. Thank you for sharing this with the world.

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jollyfuton Posted 11 years, 11 months ago.   Favorite
Wow, you have written another beautiful writing! Your writing is very intriguing. Keep up the good work and never stop writing. = )

Here's something I've written...

I live in this cell with my self-hatred
How I was raised makes me feel so isolated
These are not my thoughts or feelings for that matter
But I still feel as if I’m an ugly house that will never flatter

Even if you were to fix me
I’d still have some screws loose
I’d rather you knock me down
And tighten up my noose
Because my personality is too obtuse….
For you to understand

Until then, I’ll wait in the gallows
Waving my right hand
Trying to find a way out
Because I can’t tie a noose like you can…

It’s depressing to think that I possess this body that I can’t stand
Everyone that I love and meet will never truly know who I am
Because the face that I show is a total scam

So, For the time being I’m stuck in this body

This mind...

This soul...

I’ll forever be tortured in this blood stained hell hole.

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jollyfuton Posted 11 years, 11 months ago.   Favorite
I liked this. I liked how it flowed and it kept me interested. How long have you been writing for? What inspires you to write?
Until next time...
Jolly

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Anthony Peete Posted 11 years, 11 months ago.   Favorite
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