Between the Bars : Comment Response

Jan. 16, 2014

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Eleanor_Anne

Posted 10 years, 11 months ago. ✓ Mailed 10 years, 11 months ago

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All I can say is Blah!! it's not cute :P I've gotten into the habit of saying a few…weird things :) About a month ago my teacher asked me to write a descriptive poem on an emotion…I tried to write one that was happy but I just ended up writing about lunch, an eagle and Depression *She still laughs at the fact I wrote about lunch* My best one, in my opinion, is this one:

The feeling of darkness
It makes your day blue
The pain of loss,
to find a new.
It’s like a cage you can never break.
Trapped forever to never wake.
It eats your soul and kills your spirit.
It haunts your dreams and takes your joy.
It’s what you love most that it destroys.
Always alone.
Never to wake

I wasn't trying to make it rhyme so blah. Lately we've been doing a lot of poetry. I just want to know what you think of that one. I have been writing some stories but again, they turn dark. I guess scary stories are for me :) I can never make a happy ending and not feel fake. hehe…kinda a fail. I'm just glad mom doesn't care. My teacher called home whenever she reads one of my stories if there is anything "inappropriate" so It takes me a lot longer then normal to write a kitty story. It's annoying. Ah well it's cool :) I'll have to write one and let you read it. Would you like one?

Johnny E. Mahaffey

Posted 10 years, 10 months ago.

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