May 24, 2015

Eternal Hearse

by Antonio-Dowdy (author's profile)

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Eternal Hearse

My heart is slow to beat
and I know why
My eyes are quick to sleep
after they cry
My soul is lost in pain
because of what I've become
My handz tremble in the guilty rain
because thay know what they become
My mind just goes with the flow
knowing better but choosing worse
My mind just trapped in an
Eternal hearse

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benesova.domi@gmail.com Posted 4 years, 3 months ago. ✓ Mailed 4 years, 2 months ago   Favorite
Hello,
I've just copied your poetry, when I realized, how much I like the deepness of your words and beautiful mind, which the words could hide.
Keep on writing, your talent is undoubtable!
Wish you all the best!
(Sorry for my english, I'm not a native speaker...).
Domi

Kylieellis18 Posted 2 years, 8 months ago. ✓ Mailed 2 years, 8 months ago   Favorite
This is beautiful...

My name is Kylie, 18, i live in Texas.

Every single day i think and pray about all the people who are currently locked up, it breaks my heart but also gives me motivation to help people get out. Maybe ill be a lawyer one day.. who knows.

Anyways, we both don't know each other, but thats okay. I connected to your writings, and i must say you are talented.

I encourage you to begin meditating if you don't already. I encourage you to constantly learn every day. Wisdom is far more precious than any material item that this world could offer. Don't let The evil spirits sit on your shoulder all day... You be in control of your mind and spirit.

Just know that even if you feel alone, there are people out here that truly believe and think about all the people behind bars. The system is tough, but i bet you are tougher. "You never know how strong you are until being strong is your only option"

I hope you can smile today. Stay up no matter what! don't let anyone take your cool.
-Kylie

Antonio-Dowdy Posted 2 years, 6 months ago.   Favorite
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Antonia+3 Posted 2 years, 3 months ago. ✓ Mailed 2 years, 2 months ago   Favorite
YOU ARE SMART YOU ARE IMPORTANT YOU A BRAVE YOU ARE A SURVIVOR YOU ARE A KING YOU ARE TALENTED I'M PROUD OF YOU I WANT YOU TO BECOME EVERYTHING YOU WANT TO BE YOU ARE STRONG YOU MATTER YOU HAVE A PURPOSE SHARE YOUR STORY SI YOU CAN HELP OTHER YOUNG MEN DO BETTER YOU WILL ACHIEVE YOUR GOALS YOU WILL MAKE IT YOUR LIFE IS NOT OVER YAH PUT IT ON MY HEART TO SEND THESE WORDS TO YOU

Blackberryvirgo48+ Posted 1 month ago. ✓ Mailed 3 weeks, 6 days ago   Favorite
Hi Antonio
I'm Tisha and I love reading your posts...they are deep, intriguing, very articulate. I can feel the pain, the lust for true love and the deepness for acceptance no matter the situation. Why havent you wrote any more letters, poems? I'm always here waiting to read them. Long lost friend

Blackberryvirgo48+ Posted 1 month ago. ✓ Mailed 3 weeks, 6 days ago   Favorite
Hey this is Tisha again HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!

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