Oct. 5, 2015

The Silly, The Absurd, And The Ridiculous: Introduction

by Joaquin Jordan (author's profile)
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BSun Posted 2 years, 9 months ago. ✓ Mailed 2 years, 9 months ago   Favorite
Consider using more figurative language to make story truly come alive. There is a literary technique, "show, don't tell" that is useful.

Ex. "...exhausted from the task of fervently spanking his own posterior, the inmate soon fell into a deep slumber now assaulting all within earshot with his stupor-induced snoring."

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