This was a very moving poem. The butterfly kisses was such an interesting touch and a term I haven't heard since I was a kid. It shows the depth of your emotions here.
This poem used such an interesting mix of words you don't normally expect to read in poetry. The imagery used with this type of language writes a poem that flows more and feels more real in comparison to poetry we were forced to read in high school.
I woke up this morning thinking of my friend Darren. I miss him dearly. All of his friends do. He was taken from us way too soon. There have been many times that I have thought I would love to hang out with Darren and talk like we used to do. I remember getting a call from Darren. He was telling one of his best friends that he might need some help because he thought Charles might cause some problems. We never got that call. Why? Because you murdered him. There is NO good reason for Darren or Denise's deaths. Just think about how many peoples lives were impacted when Darren and Denise died. I have not read all your posting on this blog and I don't plan to. You deserve to be there. You murdered two people escaped from jail and also tried to hire someone to murder a witness. I could go on and on...But I would rather think of all the good memories I have of my friend.
Hi there! I have not completed your transcription yet, but I really enjoyed reading about your thoughts on beliefs and truth. Really interesting to hear a perspective on this outside of my own! I look forward to transcribing more and reading more of your work. Thank you for writing :)
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There have been many times that I have thought I would love to hang out with Darren and talk like we used to do.
I remember getting a call from Darren. He was telling one of his best friends that he might need some help because he thought Charles might cause some problems. We never got that call. Why? Because you murdered him. There is NO good reason for Darren or Denise's deaths.
Just think about how many peoples lives were impacted when Darren and Denise died.
I have not read all your posting on this blog and I don't plan to. You deserve to be there. You murdered two people escaped from jail and also tried to hire someone to murder a witness.
I could go on and on...But I would rather think of all the good memories I have of my friend.