April 18, 2019

Dear Carietta

From While I Breath, I Hope. by Sarai Rose


Dear Carietta

Loving me - I know isn't easy, I'm quite complex I must say - And yes I know, loving one such as I, surely has a price to pay.

Loving me in a world such as ours has become taboo,

You being so young and somewhat nieve, and I far too old to be so fortunate to dance with you.

There comes the sweetest gift from you - a soft and warm smile; that sweet sensuous kiss; a tender, even innocent promise that you are mine alone - gifts that lend me life anew.


There will come a day, a day that we will have to part. Though painful that day may be, we'll part stoically in the knowledge that within our hearts will be etched permanent memories - a love story ever showing.

Quite hard Carietta, will it be to let go,
All the while dying inside -
Yet this I know, your very heart, your
divine essence will ever
be close by my side.

Needing your warm, loving touch, your bright & beautiful smile to light the way.

Your comforting words with their healing touch -

I'll bid you farewell - my greatest desire to see you succeed and conquer your every goal; witnessing the beauty of your transformation how doth mine heart swell.

Beautiful moments have we built with each passing day,

Many tears I'm sure will fall along the way, and together my dear Carietta, we'll courageously face and conquer all of our fears.

My love for you yet grows, and when tomorrow comes with its demand that your path take a new direction - my devastation!

My love will still embrace you my beautiful one - across both time and space.

Ah! How I'll ever cherish those warm and beautiful smiles, the soothing beauty of those lovely eyes, and the amazing glow of you tender young face.

David "Six" Bauguess 1/18/019

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heartsandhope.sa@gmail.com Posted 2 years, 5 months ago. ✓ Mailed 2 years, 4 months ago   Favorite
Where did you get the name Carietta from? I love that name. Is Dear Carietta a poem or like a diary entry? This should be made into a song. We need the notes

Sarai Rose Posted 2 years, 3 months ago.   Favorite
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