[top half is cut off. This continues from what can be read.]
the second was revised with the help of a friend. Let me know which version you like better.
Peace. :)
Donny
Chocolate and Sex
Original:
I searched, but I found only loneliness
I struggled against darkest despair
like a light I held hope out before me
but it only showed no one was there
Chorus:
Love is a fucking myth they teach us
Romance is life's biggest lie
Fuck anyone you can fuck
as often as you can fuck.
For soon we're all gonna die.
I prayed to the gods of the cosmos
I begged to be given just one chance
I swore to do anything that they asked of me
And still I just wanted others' dance
Chorus
In the darkness I found life's a struggle
A match against everyone you meet
In madness you give your heart to another
This ensures that you soon will be beat
Chorus
Bridge
They promised they would always love me
An oath to ease all of my pain
But the dagger which they hid behind them
would carve the sanity right outta my brain
Sex is a weapon like no other
Love is fucking myth they teach us
Make 'em cum and you'll control their mind and eyes
Romance is life's biggest lie
Grudge fucked, dick whipped, or pussy whooped
At least your lust will be satisfied
ch.
repeat V1
End
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Rewrite
In darkness I found life's a struggle
So I struggled against dark despair
Like a light I held hope out before me
but it only showed no one was there
Chorus
I prayed to the gods of the cosmos
I begged to be given one chance
I swore to do anything they asked me
but my sacrifice was blood on death's lance
I searched but I found only loneliness
a match against everyone you meet
Out of madness you give your heart to another
Insuring your destiny's bleak
V.4
Grudge fucked, dick whipped, or pussy whooped
At least your lust is satisfied
Make 'em cum and you'll control their minds and eyes
Romance is life's biggest lie
Sex is a weapon like no other
It has no shape and shows no color
Bridge
They promised they would always love me
an oath to ease my pain
but the dagger they hid behind their backs
would carve the sanity right outta my brain
ch.
Repeat V.1
End
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